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I submitted my fiction piece " The Sinkhole" here and to "The Dead Mule". Yesterday I sent my poem "Lady Savannah" to several Savannnah Publications hoping for a response. None yet. I envision myself sipping mai tais by the ocean. I could dig it.

My last blog, intended to inspire hope in my stepdaughter, was met with "Cute".
The hand was extended and slapped.

I am trying hard to remember teenage angst. Hazy memories. Rock and roll and other things will do that, won't they?


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All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream....
Edgar Allen Poe


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The following comments are for "cute"
by poesandpoetry

Slap Happy
Oh but it's all the other stuff in between the rock n roll that is creating a haze. It's weird, as angry as I was, I can't remember either, I guess I just evloved into a full-blown case of Adult Angst. I loved your post to your step-daughter, if you were my step-mom I would be elated, but then I am already elated cause you are my sister! Love ya!JKB

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: February 3, 2004 )

hairspray get back
thank you lil' jkb - love ya

( Posted by: poesandpoetry [Member] On: February 3, 2004 )





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