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Dragons flew across the lands once upon a time
While wizards waved their magical spells
Knights in shinning armor saved ladies in distress
And chivalry was put to its greatest test
A time filled with beauty and mystery
With castles and dungeons ever so eerie
Myths and legends sprang from this well
When once upon a time magic and fairies dwelled
As little mischievous pixies and trolls
Played pranks on the good fairy folks
Now the wizards,fairies and dragons
Pixies and hobbit's have long since gone...
Except in this brightly lit land in time
Where by the moon light they dance
In a make believe world that still enchants
Colorful fire breathing dragons soar
Living on...In the forever more...




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The following comments are for "Forever More"
by lynlin

imagination
ahhh....one of my favorite places to dwell.. your painted words are beautiful... I can almost hear the harps.

( Posted by: poesandpoetry [Member] On: February 6, 2004 )

Fairy Tales And Dragon Days
Enjoyed this type of fantasy poetry, very imaginative, very descriptive, highly fictional and truely awesome! Cool poem!

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: February 10, 2004 )

Yay!
this poem made me happy. all of my favorite subject matter in a swirl of words! I just liked the feeling of being immersed in a good book.

( Posted by: nimue_the_mighty [Member] On: February 11, 2004 )





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