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Pineapple slushy
Smells familiar, tastes funny
I hate yellow snow

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I may be stupid but at least I'm not handsome.


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The following comments are for "Practical Joke"
by Emlyn

Yellow snow
That was sooo funny...I have a poem about that too called Don't Eat Yellow Snow

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 11, 2004 )

Nitz Kitty
Thanks very much Nitz Kitty. I'm really glad you enjoyed the poem, it was one of those things that just popped into my head and wouldn't go away. Thee's just something about the term 'yellow snow' that everyone knows what you're talking about. I find your poems very funny and would love to read your 'Yellow snow' one.
Your cat scares me.

( Posted by: Emlyn [Member] On: March 15, 2004 )





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