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We so Happy
Life’so grand
All good
Many smiles

Warm glow
Around all
Keeps safe
People

One disappears
No one says
Where, why
Just bye

Toucha
Chill current
Shiver
Fear

Not so simple
Now, aware
Felt the cold
Know the fear

Later
Smiles
Together
Love

Gone again
World’s coming clear
See now
In blackness

Not all sugar
Yummy sweet
Pain waits there
Drags down

To the light
In the bottom
Blinders murdered
See it hurts



Suffer more, fathom the truth
Childs, buoyed by blindness
Learn to plunge into darkness
Shed innocence

Towed toward depths
Beyond recovery
All are left
Submerged

In a world full of feeling
Emotions. Thoughts. Friends.
Haul us down
Anchor



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