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I've been the dark skies
Of desperate gloom.
I grasp; enclose It.
What is my beloved Time
But 'tis meaningless
Just an empty spark in hand.

I watch silently
Mourning for none
Yet everyone.
The tears flowing release
Resting wandering souls
Who've no purpose
But to shut their eyes
And leave the unseen glory.

Surrendering their dreams
So full of happiness..
But never mine
Though I may keep all.

Just a meaningless obsession,
In which I am constant prey-
Losing forevermore.


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The following comments are for "Meaningless"
by Cryptic Rapture

:)
Don't expect any wise words or advice from me, but I'm fussy, and I liked that piece :)

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: February 3, 2004 )


i really like this piece as well, youre so good at painting pictures with words.. i really admire that.. it really is a trait that everyone here should work on, my self very much included.

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: June 15, 2005 )





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