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Today I took a walk into yesterday to when I first heard you say
I love you with all my heart and soul will you walk with me through lifes journey everywhere I go
Only I must first warn you before you answer me that road won't always be easy
There will be times of sunshine and even rain, rainbows of happiness perhaps times when we'll share pain
Yet all though life I'll tenderly hold you in my arms,always will I protect you and keep you from harm
Oh how your eyes so sparkled and shined that I caught my breath as you looked into mine
That yesterday so very long ago when you said you loved me and my heart glowed,indeed we've shared laughter rainbows and sorrows
As we walked from yesterday into our tomorrows


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The following comments are for "The Journey"
by lynlin

a fair warning
a realistic warning painted with verse...nice.

( Posted by: poesandpoetry [Member] On: February 5, 2004 )





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