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hey everyone!!this will probably the best song that will ever be posted wanna kno why..Rhia(known for her cool songs like " smoke faeries message")and I wrote this song..we collaborated and created this awesome thing.. it was fun writing it, but the only time where we had problems was when trying to figure out a title for mucho propz to her..her verses are awesome..well yea that's that..k.. later..

Strolling down the gray pavement,

Stepping on the shards of glass,

Holding hands,

Looking up

At the crystalized stars

I hope to spend many nights like these,

With you Ö

Do you bleed when you step on our piercing memories,

All the glass reflecting your smiles over this sterile ceiling,

I captured these crystal stars

Trapped and sealed in a jar

Labeled with you beautiful name

Holding on and hoping youíll come back

Before I have to set them free

These third-degree blames hurt inside

All day I think about our walks

Avoiding other peopleís broken pieces

Holding hands

Looking up

At the crystalized stars

I wish I could spend another night with you

The dead end is coming to a close

Oh not again

Weíre starting to separate

But I stop

I pull you into me

Holding each other

The light mist all over our faces

Oh what a sight

Letís not do it again

Letís not waste this stary night

Our shatter glass has gone askew all untamed

Like a five year old playing with our times and our names it was all a puzzle picture game

I donít know if this sidewalk could support our sharp-ended mess

That road we departed on maybe it was all a conspiracy and I can only guess

So I guess this is it,

Itíll be hard to live separate lives

I can already feel the paper cut in my heart,

Youíve got it

Youíve owned it

(and) it stings

but itís nobodyís fault

so long

you were the first

and the only one

just remember

Iíll be at home waiting

Waiting for you

To bring back my heart

And spend another night

Walking on our broken glass

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