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You have grown so pale.
Pale hair, pale eyes- pale soul!
Just a lifeless shell
& a heart with a gaping hole.

You sweep away bad memories,
Pain plays upon your lips.
Your gait speaks louder than you,
In the defeated saunter of your hips.

Tears have stained your face,
& my, what a pity...
That the world could bring to ruins
Such a thing so pretty.

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V.


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The following comments are for "Pale Soul Woman"
by Edens_wench

Quizical Eyebrow
A trite bit pithy, but otherwise well-done.

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: February 4, 2004 )

StunninglyVisual
The choice of words used potray a perfect visual to the reader. Please accept my heartiest congratulations on a poem so well written.Spectacular!

( Posted by: RightingIt [Member] On: February 5, 2004 )





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