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How many teardrops must fall
How much heartache will it take
How many lives are to be destroyed
Because the worlds still making its toys
Deadly self destructive unimaginable horrors
Invented for the purpose of going to wars...
They call it preparing for what may lay ahead
Where's the future if its filled with fear and dread
I hear peace being shouted and preached
Yet where's the hands that reach's out to seek
Solution's to achieve what man says he craves
So no more teardrops will fall upon soldiers graves
Hate and greed run wild through this world
Like lava about to unfurl...
What use will those bombs be
Or the deardly germs released into a breeze
How can anybody possibly....win
For all of mankind would surely end
There won't be anyone left to recall
The merest of teardrops to fall


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The following comments are for "Last Teardrop"
by lynlin

Rang True
Very good poem here, glad that other's are able to write about topics such as this. It is a serious poem, but should be forwarded on to George W. Bush. I liked it alot!

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: February 10, 2004 )





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