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Not a choice, as much a small demand.
I hear what you've got to say.
And how loudly you speak
In your own quiet way!

Your eyes are half the conversation
& just as much of the room.
Whispering of domination
And they're Whispering of doom.

& You were the only one-
The only one i'll ever need.
You can plunge me into desperation,
You could make my very heart bleed!

You wrap your arms around me,
How easily you pull me under!
Water swirling in murky confusion-
My monstrous girl, you make me wonder!


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