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After ice-pick wind
dulled senses' rebellion
pain is a warm room

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In five hundred years time, most of us will be forgotten dust. But Hitler will still be remembered, God loves irony.


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The following comments are for "Pain"
by Ogg

unusual images
Paul~

Excellent imagery. You took this somewhere I wouldn't have thought of in a million years. My hats off to you. A truly unique metaphor is hard to find. Congrats.

Bart

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: January 26, 2004 )

Blah........
LOL thanks for commenting on my poetry, I am going to take your advice. Your poem was...great. I mean..man...the picture formed right in my head and for a second there, I was cold.

( Posted by: new author 2003 [Member] On: January 27, 2004 )

brrrrrr
cold and warm all at once.Nice work

( Posted by: RightingIt [Member] On: January 29, 2004 )

Bravo
A very nice piece.
Worthy of a '9'

( Posted by: shelldragger [Member] On: February 5, 2004 )





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