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Violet went with the daisies
To find something she knew.
Nothing left but weeds & thorns
Covered in morning's dew.

Her hair cascading down her back,
Her eyes a darksome brown.
Still looking for closeness,
While falling further down.

Such a beautiful heart,
In such an admirable case!
Giving, giving til she's gone-
With a smile on her face.


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