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I remember when I was small
I remeber wanting to be tall
I remember going to the beach I saw a fish and could not reach
I remeber going to the moutains and drinking from the water foutains
I remember saying plese to go to Chuck E Cheese
I remeber riding in my grandma's car for trips short and far
I remember lots of things from being small
love from my family most of all

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Patrisha


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