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Life tinted blue in winter, snow screaming past windows against a midnight dove sky in a world of cancer; walking by, passing through lives, drifting in and out of memory: old man dreaming of wormed apples in delirium optics, rotten to the core, can't eat no more; New Age oracles and apocalyptic prophets, or paranoid visions through myopic eyes, feeling blind in no time, sometime.

..then disappearing footprints.

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