The following comments are for "Yackety-yak" by Ogg
formulaic not much too say
As much as I hate to say it, this one left me a bit cold. The formula was correct but the overall impression I got from this piece seemed a bit well blah, compared to some of your other work Normally I agree with Jess but this time I simply have to disagree.
Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: January 22, 2004
Thanks for taking time to comment, everybody. Bart, I don't agree that it's bland, and Pen I don't think all poems should be cutting. I suppose I just didn't feel in a slicing mood at the time. I was in a canteen, a gaggle of students walked past, talking ( of course) and it gave me the idea. Different strokes and all that.
Paul the Ogg