Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search

Average Rating

(2 votes)

RatingRated by

You must login to vote

Gossip jabbers past
another reality
fades into distance

In five hundred years time, most of us will be forgotten dust. But Hitler will still be remembered, God loves irony.

Related Items


The following comments are for "Yackety-yak"
by Ogg

formulaic not much too say

As much as I hate to say it, this one left me a bit cold. The formula was correct but the overall impression I got from this piece seemed a bit well blah, compared to some of your other work Normally I agree with Jess but this time I simply have to disagree.


( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: January 22, 2004 )

Thanks for taking time to comment, everybody. Bart, I don't agree that it's bland, and Pen I don't think all poems should be cutting. I suppose I just didn't feel in a slicing mood at the time. I was in a canteen, a gaggle of students walked past, talking ( of course) and it gave me the idea. Different strokes and all that.
Paul the Ogg

( Posted by: ogg [Member] On: January 24, 2004 )

Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.