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As she starts to cry
She starts wonder
Wonder why everything turned out this way
Why she turned out this way

They say they understand
How can they understand
No one understands what's like to be her
Do they understand what's like to look in a mirror
and see a stranger

Do they understand what it's like to feel empty inside
They tell her to stay strong
They say it will be better soon
How can it get better when she's already dying
on the inside

Her soul is empty
She doesn't care anymore
She doesn't feel anymore
To her she's the only person in a crowd

If they try to touch her
She will break
She's dying on the inside and
She likes it
This way she doesn't have to deal with anything anymore

They tell her to be strong
But it's too late
She's already dead
On the inside

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