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I curled up on my bed listening to the rain. I felt so depressed when I saw him lying in his casket. I remember the accident so well. It was pouring down rain. Much like it is now. We were coming home from a party and Dat could hardly see the road. All I saw was a flash of brown fur and we hit the ditch. I woek up at the hospital to the news of Dat's death. My friends did not realize how much we loved each other. I wept all through the funeral. Through my tears I kept thinking Dat siad he would never leave me, but now I was all alone. So i sit here on my bed weaping for my lost love. Then I heard a noise coming from the end of my bed. A look of shock and horror covered my face when there at the end of my bed stood Dat.



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