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what is this?
Don't know the meaning,
but we strive for the best.
Don't know the purpose,
but we live the rest...
Like its our last.

I swear it's so tragic.
Rolling the stone,
up to the top.
Bearing the pain,
then falling back down.
But Im there, always there.
to help you back to the top.

Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday.
The week is oh so long,
waiting for it to end.
Oh look its your friends.
Here to bring,
more pain and sorrow.
Just can't wait till tomorrow.


Its so tragic,
this absurd thing,
we call life.
falling over and over again.
is there no point in trying?
can i just pull the trigger?
i'll be honest,
and keep this promise.
Be by your side,
till the end of days.

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The following comments are for "The Tragic Hero"
by ae86drifter19

nice try my friend, not much else i can say, since im not much of a critic...but good nonetheless

( Posted by: northerain [Member] On: January 19, 2004 )

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