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You're eyes are like a thousand stars, shining brightly
You cannot imagine what you do to me
Your lips touch mine I touch your face I'm in paradise
You ask me if I love you I don't have to think twice

One look from you and I know what I am living for
My knees feel weak I close my eyes almost hit the floor
Through all the years and all the tears know one thing
for sure
Until the day I die my love will always be yours

I'm hopelessly lost
In your love
You make me high as a bird, I'm flying above
All the trees
Your my fantasy
Without you I'm blind you're my eyes and you make me

When I'm with you I have no fear, I'm released and free
From the worries of the world that chain and bondage my
Your presence gives me wings, and I think I could fly
Through the air and through the clouds take my hands
we'll touch the sky

Where I would be without you, I don't want to know
You're everything I am, you complete my soul
I'm lost in you to tell the truth I don't want to be found
For fear of falling fast until my feet touch the ground

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