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Life more complex then the fact of one being.
The earth, the universe, the water in its all
a part of life that goes with man.

The stars, the sea, the air that we breath
altered by us and we by nature.
Whether its the broken glass at the bottom
of a brook or crude oil in oceans nest,
it has changed and there for so are we.

Now having that in mind I think of rocks
how some by many degrees are made up of different
substance and there for changed inside and out
by the wind, the rains,movement from the earth's
every motion.

The pressure of our foot leaving prints on the
ground, never thinking for one instance that very
spot will never be the same because we had been

One could cover their steps by using a brush to
sweep them away, but the earth has been turned
no matter which way you leave it.

The days sunny or clouded, the air then makes
change in chemistry,then when you think of what
we have added to the change by building and
taking away never staying in one place comes
wind of change.

With all this imagine how the branches fall
from trees then rot in the forest and the soil
is made nutrients for seeds ,think of what we
as man do to man, just from passing by not
thinking why.

Then if you can think again what effect we have
on family and friends.Our voice, our eyes,
our hands,not to exclude, our hearts,
just by one little word,our life.



The following comments are for "life and wind of change"
by CoCo

sorry I hadnt checked in on all my comments. You and penelope are way to kind thanks

( Posted by: CoCo [Member] On: February 28, 2004 )

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