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I am the cool clouds floating near
I make up different parts of the atmosphere
I am multicolored and have many brethren
We hide angels and aliens here in the heavens
Drape earth with dew from hovering mists
Sometimes water will pour, sometimes only drip – a little bit
On the beach where you sunbathe
We try – but can’t block much of those hot sunrays
When it gets cold, on bitter blue days
Snow will fly down to where I say
You say you see a train or a fluffy sheepdog
You won’t see a thing in one of my fogs
Listen close but you’ll never hear
The cool clouds that float so near.



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by diason

thanks...
thanks to all who read and review my work - this is important to me, as it determines my final major grades and quality of projects that i make. THANK YOU especially, Claire!

-cammisa

( Posted by: diason [Member] On: January 14, 2004 )





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