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“So there’s this guy right? And he’s a serial killer. Except this guy is really weird. I mean, all serial killers are weird…but this guy…he is just screwed up beyond belief. Anyways, what he does, is every murder he does, he does in a really unique way. And he does one every single night. He’s been doing it for almost two years. I mean, I didn’t even know there were that many was to kill a person.”

The guy looked up at Ben, seeming to show a bit of interest, but mostly just looking confused, “Um…so, why are you telling me this?”

“Well, you know, we’ve been sharing a room in this hostel all day, and haven’t said a word to each other. I guess this is just something to talk about.”

“Ok, so go on.”

“I’ll tell you a few of the more exciting ones. Your not going to be grossed out by any of this, are you?”

“Nah. I’ve got a pretty strong stomach.”

“Ok, so his very first murder was pretty gruesome. He uses some super sharp knife to cut through a window in the back of the house. Then, he climbs in, and walks around till he finds the stairs. He gets to them, and quietly he goes up them. Then he walks around the second floor, till he finds what looks like a master bedroom. He slowly turns the handle, and opens the door. There’s only one person in the bed, and they’re still asleep. He shakes them, and wakes them up. They are a bit dazed at first, but soon they understand what’s going on, and the start trembling, and mumbling, presumably begging for their life. Anyways, the guy hits them across the head, knocking them out. Then he goes back downstairs, and goes into the garage. He finds an old table saw, and walks back upstairs. The person is still knocked out.”

“So, is this person a guy or a girl?”

“Why does it matter?”

“I don’t know. I just want to know. Just to visualize it better. I mean, if I’m hearing a story, I want to be able to at lest sort of imagine what is going on.”

“Ok, well, it’s a girl. Anyways, he goes into the room, and she’s still knocked out, and he takes the saw, and, well, plainly put, cuts off her left arm. Then he takes the arm, and takes it to the far end of the house. So, he comes back, and cuts off the right one. Then he takes that to another corner of the house. Then he cuts off the left leg, and puts that in yet another corner. He cuts off the right leg, and leaves it on the bed. All this time, the lady has been fading in and out of consciousness. Next, he takes her body, and drags it out to the lawn, and leaves it there. She dies from blood loss later that night.”

“Hmm…this guy sounds pretty crazy.”

“Oh yes. The next murder isn’t quite as painful though. In fact, he simply shot the victims in the head. What’s more interesting is how he got to them. He starts out by breaking open the window with his fist, and opening the lock. Now, remember he has a knife that can cut through windows, so who knows why he used his hand.”

“Well, he is insane. That could have something to do with it.”

“True. Anyways, he goes in the door, and he starts walking towards the master bedroom. As he walks there, he turns on every single light switch he passes. He also passes a shower, and two faucets. He turns them on. As he walks through the kitchen he turns on the blender and the coffee machine. When he passes the bathroom, he flushes the toilet. So, finally he gets to the bedroom, and of course, the couple living in there are already awake from all the commotion, but they are too freaked out to call the police. So he walks in, smiles, and shoots them in the head. Then he leaves the house, leaving all the appliances still running, and the couples’ children cowering under their beds.”

“How do you know all these details?”

“I was watching this report about it on TV. They went even more in depth than I am going. There was a two-hour long special about it. So, you want to hear anymore?”

“Well…it’s 11 o’clock, so I should be getting to sleep soon, but tell me one more.”

“Sure. He goes to the house of this soon to be married couple, and they are really romantic. The guy is always doing things to surprise his girlfriend. You know, in sexual kind of ways. So, the girl comes home one night, and she sees a sign telling her to go to the bathroom. So she goes to the bathroom, and sees some lingerie. She puts it on, and walks upstairs to the bedroom. She slowly opens the door, and calls out in a sexy voice “I’m home.” She walks in, and on the floor in front of her is her husband’s dead body. The killer is sitting on the bed. ‘You look beautiful in that’ he says to her, and then jumps up, and strangles her to death.”

“Wow. This guy is creepy. Is he in jail now?”

“Not yet. That special I was watching said that they think he is still at large, and they have found killings that appear to be done by him as little as a week ago.”

“Spooky. Anyways, I’m going to go to sleep now.”

“Wait…there is one more I just thought of, which you might really like.”

“Ok, I go ahead I guess.”

“The guy goes to a hostel, and he checks in early in the day. He stays there the whole day, and he never says a word to his roommate. Then, late at night, he finally starts talking, and he starts talking about his previous murders. Then, right before his roommate goes to sleep-“, Ben took a knife, and stabbed the man in the heart.


The following comments are for "Serial Killer"
by Twisted Mystik

Pretty good, twisted
I liked it. Pretty gorey, which is right up my alley, and I thought it had a nice flow to it. The ending could be seen a mile away though, but otherwise a very interesting read. I'll have to look up some of your other stuff.

( Posted by: Richard Dani [Member] On: November 24, 2001 )

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