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I feel like im drifting away
laying on the floor, a stray.
As the cold air wraps around me and pain's arms hug me tightly I sink into the floors passing by the classes with open doors.


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by u wont understand

This is so melancholy, I agree with Claire, your writing just keeps getting better.
Keep writing, be strong.
Paul the impressed Ogg

( Posted by: ogg [Member] On: January 13, 2004 )

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