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I gave up on trying to find love
I figured it would eventually find me
Too much heartbreak in searching
For someone to be part of my life's story
When you came along I fought my feelings real hard
Thinking this would be just another game
As it turn out I couldn't be more wrong
Because you're not at all the same

And when we kissed for the very first time
A million fireworks shot through the sky
Took your hand, touched your cheek
Tried to find something to say, but I couldn't speak

Oh, no. Here I go again
Flying higher being brought up by love's fickle winds
Oh, no. Here I go lost again
Win or fail, I don't care. I'm letting go and I'm diving in

How could I have doubted love?
You're a hundred times better than I could ever dream
And finally after all these years I discovered what
love really means
You make me ecstatic
It's a habit staying up all night just thinking of you
I love laying on our backs, searching the sky
watching clouds fly by
Nothing else that I would rather do.

Sometimes we may argue and fight
But I know everything will turn out just all right
I look at you and everything else melts away
After all these years, I can still say

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The following comments are for "Lost Again"
by Soulfree77

the whole fireworks during the kiss is way too cliche. i would suggest a change.

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: November 5, 2004 )

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