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Verse 1: Nothing good comes easy
Thats what she said to me
Just ask anybody
Who's in love with somebody
I admit I was skeptical
I had had more than my full
Of girls that were beautiful
But were inwardly horrible
Bridge: But oh man, doesn't she look great tonight?
Everything she's saying to me sounds right
I'm trying so hard to hold on tight
But I'm falling

Chorus: Break down my walls
Come pouring in
Let your love fall
On me again
Dive into me
Don't be afraid
Just close your eyes
And taste the rain

Verse 2: I admit I could not deny
The feelings that I had inside
She was the apple of my eye
And she made me feel alive
So I gave my everything
Her love was the song I'd sing
She was my queen, I was her king
She made me fly, she gave me wings
Bridge: Oh, no. Man did I screw up this time
I am losing what I thought was mine
This is not at all what I had in mind
And I'm sorry



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The following comments are for "Taste the Rain (C)2003"
by Soulfree77

Clairesbest
Thanks so much for the comment. I took up guitar around a year ago and have been writing and playing ever since. I havent had much time to look and comment on your work, but from the small amount I've seen you seem like a great artist. Again, thanks. And I hope you like the rest of my work!

-Tim

( Posted by: Soulfree77 [Member] On: January 12, 2004 )

yeah
i really liked this song. especially the chorus. i could definitely hear it in my head. keep writing man.

oh yeah, what kind of style is meant for this song...acoustic, heavy, etc?

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: November 5, 2004 )





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