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Your foolish heart endeavours to beat another race,
Through another fate
Mine is fortified against those tainted lies,
But your whispers sets a winding path to that place where you reside,
With your old tune encased in shallow tones,
I am cursed with your soul
You consume me with that poisonous passion.
Destitute from my demise
I delve into your mimed world
You throw me in.
In another state
You take me through another day
Your heart beats a race for two
- As I fall.
I fall and with petrified satisfaction.

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by savaf

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( Posted by: savaf [Member] On: January 16, 2004 )

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