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We did wonderful things
Not all of them in the dark
Like eating melted Strawberry Icecream
And licking the spoon with tongues

Laughing in public
As people thought us crazy
Waking up warm
Next to your warmth, next to mine

My seeing senses
Tell me the length of love
My unseeing eyes
Tell me not the width

To us and to tomorrow
We know not what either will bring
For now you
And not tomorrow will I sing



The following comments are for "No Sense in Love"
by Wilcobaby

Been Gone Too Long
Thanx Clairesbest,

Always appreciate the comments. It's nice to see that the sensual side was seen by someone.


( Posted by: Wilcobaby [Member] On: January 12, 2004 )

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