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She looks at her arms
She can see the scares of past cuts
And She can see the fresh new raw ones
She likes the pain
It helps her feel numb

She starts to cry
She tells herself everything will be ok
But she doesn't really believe it
She wants everything to go away

She can't stand it anymore
She takes the knife in her hand and cuts herself
She can feel everything slip away from her
As the crimson blood flows on to the floor

She goes unconscious
She can finally escape from all the pain
It was her brother who found her
He found her to late

Her friends nor her family knew
They didn't know about all the pain she felt
They didn't know she would try to end the pain this way

They said she acted so happy
They said she seemed okay
They would have never guessed about her pain
They say they would have helped her

They couldn't have helped her
No one could have helped her
She saw only one way to end everything
So she took that way out


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The following comments are for "One Way Out"
by disOrder

me
i think that was one of theb est cut poems ive ever heard 3 times better than mine it in my opinion it explains alot how i feel the pain, the pain that aches inside of me.....
but yeh i liked it alot keep it up

( Posted by: u wont understand [Member] On: January 9, 2004 )





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