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Today is the day,
It is yours to cherish,
Lucky you.
It is a new beginning,
Keep your head up and smile.
New challenges lay ahead..

Pre chorus
Sealed with care,
Sent with love,
Hope you like it.

Oh yeah its here,
What’s your wish for this year,
Reach for the stars,
Try something new,
Its not much, but its all I can give you.

Fourteen, fifteen, sixteen,
A new phase begins,
So go for a beautiful dream.
Its not just a day that,
Comes and go.
Memories passed and forgotten,
Now a year older,
More will be created and remembered.

Pre chorus

Unwrap and savor this day,
Take out the candles,
Lick the icing,
On your fingertips.
Even after the day ends,
Seize what lies ahead
And keep on rocking
Forever you’ll be
My rockstar.


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The following comments are for "the gift"
by ae86drifter19

happy day, rockstar
This is my first encounter with a Pre chorus ... interesting

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: January 11, 2004 )

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