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Apart, and a shaman comes; the sundial burns, a shadow turns to me like black medicine: in a frame, my third eye has a mind in mind, while I become kirlian, and dream.

Death, then: a whisper of rhythm in my circadian heart, down to an art in the depth, floating ascension to heaven; "..below a balcony with billowing curtains, in a cloudy, drizzling world losing oxygen, clumsy snipers execute world leaders on a beach volleyball, football stadium battleground, where the earth heaves and civilians are given a brief respite from planetary evacuation, while the army keeps on demilitarising and a maladroit hero gets the girl. One million dollars is accidentally won during a game of keno in a cheap casino: it's split in half, while I meander through downtown streets and shopping malls, trying to claim my prize from banks and convenience stores."

The television's snowing and it's positively antarctic outside; her face is glowing, twins sewn together inside.

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