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as the cold steel blade of my brothers small sharp scissors dig into my skin shivers and shakes crawl up my body but i feel a sudden warmth as the blood races out out of my open wounds. i look down at my cut up arms and in my mind and body i feel relief, a release of tension. when i see the blood i start dabbing it away, dabbing away the pain that is inside my blood, dabbing and dabbing until theres nothing left and my tissue is bright red...


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abby i love you and i will always be there for you. i know what your going through but i know that you are strong and you can overcome it! i love you babe and i will always be here from you!

( Posted by: DiTzYcHiKa91 [Member] On: January 3, 2004 )

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