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With open hands
accept your subtle
not grasping

(though I'm gasping to wind my
soul around your heart like a
vine entwining love along
with life and limbs blending
breath and bodies merging
mind and skin breathless
ache and strain sweat
sliding gliding south)

savor flavor
of you
on my open

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The following comments are for "Restraint"
by cybele

uh - sorry
Oh, I'm sorry Cybele, I - uh - must have got the wrong room - uh - our hostess told me just to drop my coat on the bed, 'n - sorry, fella - look, I'll leave you two alone, sorry I blundered in on you -

( Posted by: johnlibertus [Member] On: January 3, 2004 )

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