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Got another song with audio. So I値l be e-mailing updates to people on my list. ^_^ The story in this song was last night, before midnight. I was at a party, bored at stupid people and went outside the clubhouse to the swings and watched the fireworks and listened to Jimmy Eat World on my cd player. Yeah. And you start thinking bout other things, and I thought bout what happened during the year. Reflecting back. I remembered lots of people I met and yeah. Life doesn稚 really suck that much, I mean overall. Heh. I値l stop there.

If you want to hear the audio. Go to my homepage listed on my lit profile and click on music on the yellow horizontal bar. And then click on the song name. Thank you so much and happy new year.

Smoke Faeries Message

Sky is blossoming with fireworks, tonight,
Trailing, bleeding downwards to me,
Sitting alone on the swings,
To another year.

Letting the wind numb me to sleep,
Afterthoughts only exist after tonight.
Think out loud to the people I致e met,
So good and so many,
Pushing them away, I was so un use to life then.

Track ten spinning round in me and the December air,
Wet grass and drifting smoke faeries
Giving me late advice in my ear,
Late advice dies at midnight,
When the big hand copies the small,
I知 relying on a brick wall,
To break my fall,
I can only hope for the better,
Instead of useless letters,
When people can tell it痴 autumn,

Jump in the handwritten piles,
Letters not thrown away or filed,
Just sitting on my desk inking denial.

And the people I wanna thank just being in my life are. Lol. This is a bit funny, but I知 serious on this. Thank you and hope we値l keep in touch and all. The parentheses is the pen name for if they have one.

Kacie (Angel of Lost Love)
Manda (Jadelina)
Rob (nutnlp1)
Dave (RockettmanX)
Kem (Aerie Surreal)
Savv (Savv)
Ian (GhosTRunner)
Coni (Coni)

If I forgot anyone. Sorry and please im me on aim or msn. I知 real sorry. And I値l add you on. -_- *sigh* I kno I知 going to forget someone. Anyhoothanks to the people above and thank you for getting my mind off reality for awhile. Thanks.


---rock on, rock out and rock away, b/c that's what life's all bout, live it.---

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The following comments are for "Smoke Faeries Message"
by Rhia

better as it progressed
Loved some of those stanzas or verses, particularly the last and the line about using "the brick wall to break your fall."
Cleverly intermixing reality and thoughts, I felt it got stronger and stronger as it progressed. Yes, people do read blogs and sometimes listen too. :)
Nice lyrics Rhia.

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: January 5, 2004 )

this is awesome
whoa.. i really like this song...the words are very descriptive, it almost feels like i am i listened to the song and it got even better..

( Posted by: ae86drifter19 [Member] On: January 10, 2004 )

hey...i listened to u and went to the jamisonparker website...i listened to them..and thought they were alrite at first...but after like a couple of dayz..i started to listen to them more..then i ended up liking them..and getting their cd..theyre awesome..and oh yea..they were here in s.f yesterday.. and i went to their show...they rocked..coheed and cambria were there too..neways..just hit me up on aim or sn is hopelessxemoxkid k.. late..

( Posted by: ae86drifter19 [Member] On: January 22, 2004 )

Improving quickly
Hey Rhia, this is Ivan. Nice lyrics you've got there. You are positively getting better all of the time. Umm.... thanks for the recognition, too, even if you did spell my name wrong. I just happened by this piece, and I like it. I've fallen far behind on posts and comments. Keep writing!

( Posted by: GhosTRunner [Member] On: February 25, 2004 )

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