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Common Sensations
December 29th, 2003 - December 31st, 2003

A sudden movement
is just a reflex of the body
trying to tell you
that there's something different
hoping for the touch

A taste in the mouth
is just a residue of yourself
growing more bitter
then passing it along to the next
kissing on the lips

A stream of tears
is just water exiting the body
falling even faster
as the pressure becomes too much
turning of the face

An unexpected gasp
is just a sign for another chance
letting in the air
allowing for another deep breath
exhaling all the doubt

A shock to the heart
is just an impulse to the brain
carried by the nerves
coursing through the bloodstream
waiting for the feeling

...i close my eyes in order to see...

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