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The hero's claws slay men who have no honor.
The cry before the blade,
they taste their own defeat.
Fresh on our lips,
decaying blood and love.
And

hope...
happiness...
peace...

When we scheme we bring to life the things,
that no one wants to see.
Creatures from the demon depths
with wings!

Ah, they soar!

As many rule the world below
by pulling strings like little puppet masters,
weaving their own plans.
The path is set and clear.

Welcome to the wheel of fate,
destiny at hand!
Sit down now and wonder in this moment all asunder,
was this the puppet master's plan?

------
"God grant me distraction."
-Zampano


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The following comments are for "The Wheel of Fate"
by Darkshine Raven

Darkshine
This is different, but I like it very much. Thanks for the read.

Blessings

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: January 3, 2004 )

Jeannie
Sorry, I didn't notice your comment here. Thank you, I like to do different. ;)

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: February 5, 2004 )





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