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I've nothing
She's got
I'm everything
She's not
I'm worthless
She's hot
Emotions
I've got
She's empty
I'm full
She's a user
You're her tool
I'm a fixer
of your heart
She's the breaker
not long forgot
She's your lover
Not your friend
I'm your lover
until the end
I'm afraid
She's a fool
IF she'd loved you -
She'd know too.
You're the one thing
I can't quit
You're the one who seems
to fit.
I broke this addiction
once before
You found me there on the floor.
I was broken
You were too
When will fate get the clue?
Strange triangles
Drama ensues
I'm here forever
So are you.
Can you fix me


once again
I promise this time I won't bend.


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If I did it...I didn't mean to.
If I hurt you...I didn't mean to.
If I left you...I didn't mean to.
If I scared you...I didn't mean to.
If I loved you...I didn't mean to.


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