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as the blade touches my wrist
i think of all the things i'll miss
i think about our greatest wishes
i think about those hugs and kisses

as i pull the blade across
that is when i'm truly lost
lost in a world of guilt and shame
lost in a world without a name
lost in a world with blood all around
lost in a world without a sound

as i lie there on the floor
i think about it more and more
you don't love me
you don't care
why should i die beacause your not here
why should i die just sitting here

as i pull myself up
it hurts more and more
but i'll survive
i'll be here
if you come back
i'll be here
if you love me
you'll be here


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by noonespecial

aww
ill be here for you brandon!!!!!!!! i care about u!!!!! luv ya!!!

( Posted by: Bubls211 [Member] On: December 29, 2003 )





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