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I walk to the gate of hell with no regret
with all this pain it never left
with the cuts and scars forever stay from that time of that day when you went away
From the cutting and bleeding i am still with you
thats the only way to deal with these issues
it puts me back to the feeling of angels
when i see the candle lit it touches me from all angles
when i see your picture
i want to forever hold the feeling
when nothing is lost
and my mind is feeling
from this ocean of love i fell
but i let you go and i hurt you so
don't look back just forever walk away
as i walk to the gates of hell with one regret
and that is forever losing you


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heya babe
heya babe i thought it wus good and if u need 2 talk 2 me feel free kellie

( Posted by: bubls211 [Member] On: January 7, 2004 )





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