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why did i look at you
why did i stay
why did i tell you i would be there for the rest these days
why did i give you my heart when i knew i couldn't stay
why did i let you love me
i should have walked away
maybe then i could sleep these days away
without all this pain
i hurt you so bad and for this i know
i called you mean things like a slut and a ho
but really all along it was me who was creepin
with all these girls just liein and cheatin so for that i don't deserve you, i shouldn't get your hugs,your kisses,and that love
you gave to me all these days, baby i am sorry i should have walked away
knowing that is wasn't good enough
knowing that i was a jerk
baby all this time i have treated you like dirt
so if you walk away i will stay because i have fallin in love with this blond haired angel------ Ashley for which i wish i knew how to love---- ashley for which i think about all alone without her------ ashle for all the times i have lied cheated and hurt------ ashley for the day you may love me again i'll always love ashley


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The following comments are for "why didn't I"
by noonespecial

butters!
hey butters its jackie and shelby. you are so sweet. even though you and ash have been through some rough times your still there for her and that means something. we didnt know that you were such a good poet. keep writng cause you obviously an excellent writer.

( Posted by: DiTzYcHiKa91 [Member] On: December 30, 2003 )





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