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I'm cold so cold so freezing;
yesterday was the winter solstice, a new year
began under the sign of the sisters of mercy.
i don't beg for mercy i don't beg for sleep.
i beg for love so pretend i'm a witch and burn me, my sisters
so i'll be warm and cosy;
no, no i can't change the world
no, i'm not from here don't teach me your language


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