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pray, pray for me
My mind is broken and my body's sore.
And there is no place to head to,
So I'm walking down this road.
I can't hear your empty voices anymore.

And I can't keep going on this way,
there are places where my soul won't go anymore.
ANd I'd like to talk for hours,
about the things that matter most.
but I can't get this thing started anymore...

Hold on, hold it tight.
hold your soul and keep your heart in sight.
and if there's anyone to talk to
I just don't want to be alone.
but there's no-one around no-one in sight.

And it's ok to feel the cold around your heart.
the dark creeping in your mind won't fade with the light.
but if you just stay with me,
then we'll have each other you see,
and this place won't be so desolate tonight.

there's so many faded people,
so many darkened minds,
thier all forgotten in artificial night.
but each one may hold an answer,
for another faded soul,
there's always so much forgotten light.

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The following comments are for "forgotten song"
by wally 5

hello im a singer im im having problems with writing my own song i get stuck at the middle and i cant finish it if you can please give me a few tips or pointers thank you very much

( Posted by: DReaMz [Member] On: January 4, 2004 )

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