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You, the implement
of my deconstruction

I accept
and welcome

as I lie open

Should not the pod thank the knife?

head split open
heart split open
gut split open

poison ego gutted from this shell

Heaven pours out
Heaven pours in.




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The following comments are for "Husk"
by cybele

yes!
This, young lady, is one hell of a poem. Wherever this is coming from, bow twice daily in that direction.

( Posted by: johnlibertus [Member] On: December 21, 2003 )





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