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I hear your word as they cut through me with great pain. Fear creeps all around me as tears begin to stain my face. My heart begans to pound with such great force as if trying to leap from beneath my chest. My mind is scrabbling for the right words. Your hand is closing in on the door. I beg for you to stay and not cause such pain. Love is not enough is all you are able to say. My heart is tearing within myself. Those words killing all within. I see a glipse of hope in your eyes......stay with me and we will survive.

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