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I have danced unashamedly
In the light that you radiate
I have spun webs of dreams
And wishes for my fate
I have dreamt blissfully of you
And all your beautiful charms
But dreams are never enough,
When you’re not in my arms.

they say a rose is a flower, and that it is red, it blooms, it grows, and then it is dead

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The following comments are for "I HAVE DANCED…"
by zesty_lemon

bravo! bravo!
"I agree. Dreams are never enough, if it's not with the one you luv."

( Posted by: pooky28 [Member] On: March 3, 2004 )

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