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engraved forever
on my arm
your name i'll see
at the break of dawn
this is a mistake
i can't erase
with out any haste
i have to make
an important decision
without any haste
an important decision
with precise passion
to love or not
to put in great thought
the ideas you have
about my heart
this is t eday
that we part
so R.I.P



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by mad chyld

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