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like yesterday my thoughts spoke in dreams
melting bodies blend between
the real and the unreal of sublime fantasy

lured by the glistening moonlight
i eased my head gently upon your shoulder
you held my world upon those pillars
and in those starving intense eyes

i see the colours of the night
merge into a cadence of haunting paradise
arms encircled around hesitant warmth
everything falls and it feels so right

feasting spirits and dancing souls
my lush satin dress now lingers of your sweet cologne
let our hearts keep the music playing just this night
as we bathe in a forbidden twilight.



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by starkissed

a nice read
I like the sentiment of this piece. It has a nice flow, and was a nice, relaxing read at the end of my day.

( Posted by: gsmonks [Member] On: December 18, 2003 )

beautiful
I just love this one. Very relaxing, full of a stilled, eteric emotion. Good work

( Posted by: Dew Of Blood [Member] On: December 19, 2003 )





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