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It seems like you've been
gone for a thousand years.
Now I could barely drive
away all of my fears.
Missing you has always
been giving me tears.
I wish you could at least
live somewhere so near.
I've been waiting for you
to come back someday.
All of my tears have been
dropping down like rain.
It seems like we barely
met around yesterday.
But ever since the day
you have gone far away...
Our friendship had teared
apart since you moved.
I've been hopeless now to
tell you the truth...without you.


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