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WARNING: CONTAINS SMALL PARTS. NOT FOR CHILDREN UNDER THREE YEARS OLD. MUST BE SUPERVISED BY AN ADULT.

Its all a bad dream. Close your eyes and get ready. Darkness. Daylight will not be upon us for quite sometime. So lets venture off into the depths of the unknown. Defend ourselves by any means. Hord off all of the wickedness. Be one with a Dr. Seuss character on acid. (not my idea) and see what life is all about. DUCK! goose, sorry. I am a jack ass. Cant help it. It flows like wine through the holes in a brick of swiss cheese. So dive right in. Eat your vegetables, learn all you can, never close your eyes and watch your own back slip off into nothingness. Kind of like a hot summer day on a matress being pulled down a dirt road by a small pick-up. A twelve pack and a shotgun. Joe-bob on the tube yelling about how pace-makers and AM radios go hand in hand with the demolition derby. Tyrany and, oh, sweet visual aids. How stimulating. All except for the piles of bullshit that are stinkin the place up. Static. Sweet sensuous love butter and it somewhat tastes like cheesecake, alright. How many times can that happen in one day? Have another. Its on me. THanks. dont mention it. Dont remember it either. Its shit like this that can get your tit in a ringer, whatever that is supposed to mean. Lets dub some tapes and doob it up marley style just like back in the day when you were my age. Live a little. Rock the ganj. No more headaches and no more problems. Smoke. Toke. Choke. Thats what its all about. Damn reefer addicts. I dont know whether to laugh or cry or pick up some fast food. D.) all of the above. winner. Someone throw me a life preserver. I think someone should try to catch a block of concrete with their teeth. Only it would have to be a cartoon. That chick is hideous, peace yo!


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