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There will be no peace on earth –
unless the presents they receive –
are anything but perfect.
It’s a cruel Xmas eve.
Where love and understanding –
are terrorised by greed.
Upon your festive spirits –
corporations cruelly feed.
Immaculate conceptions.
Xmas equals wealth.
Projected profit margins-
signify the ailing health –
of a nation overspending.
The verdict reads. ‘Guilty’
Disastrously in debt –
out of generosity.
Another artificial Xmas.
Drink until you burst.
Numb the happy New year.
Quench your raging thirst.
Excuse your misbehaviour –
on the stresses of yuletide.
Loan-sharks and greedy children -
aggravating icy tides.
Another year, another mortgage.
Another bill you cannot pay.
The cost of satisfaction –
crucifying Xmas day.

Sneak Technique

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The following comments are for "Cruel Yule."
by Sneak

BRAVO! I like, I like, thanks for submitting something i enjoyed :o)

( Posted by: King Lucifer [Member] On: December 16, 2003 )

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