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In time Iíll forget your treason.
Iíll move on happy without rhyme or reason.
Iíll Walk away looking for a true connection,
But in turn I could only find Your reflection.

I would kill to rid the time we Had,
I would lose myself to forget the good and the bad.
Your love was a poison, The killing condition.
Your words put me in a dull numbed position.


I hope to fall into shadow
I hope to rot away
And if tomorrow you ask
youíll find your answer lying in waste.


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The following comments are for "memories"
by DEMONeyesBLUE

Meh!
Good poem, but i could swear I've heard the 1st line before ...?!?!?! i think im crazy..who agrees?

( Posted by: King Lucifer [Member] On: December 16, 2003 )

memories
i thought that was a beautifully written poem! it flowed so well.

( Posted by: elspeth_flick [Member] On: December 18, 2003 )

wow
damn baby i never thought u thought that way of us but i guess u never told me and now i know

( Posted by: danel [Member] On: January 4, 2004 )





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